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I enjoyed this. The only criticism I would make is the sound quality of your flash was a little bit hard to hear, thank goodness for subtitles. And lol@ "I might go back and redo it tomorrow". I wonder how long ago that was.
Author's Response:
I have a sound booth now, so I'm cool and can make nice sound ;D I dunno... why don't we look at the date and see how long ago it was? ;P
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I adore halloween, I had a complete NG profile revamp just for the holiday. You automatically would have passed in my eyes because you had a Nightmare Before Christmas song in it, which was a perfect touch. I liked how you could choose your characters because that added a little more personality. The game itself isn't a new concept but because it's halloween themed and the graphics are good and it looks as if you made this one with care and love, it's great. 'I am the clown with the tear away face, here in a flash and gone without a trace'. Ahhhh, I love halloween, Sorry! : )
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It's very good for a start, your drawings are nice, and you seem to be able to animate moderately well. I don't think it's NG quality, because I would like to think that NG has the best of the best, but it's definitely not bad. You say that you haven't quite gotten the hang of flash, but you show potential. It needs to be longer and more awesome, because currently, it's really short, and while everything else is good, it needs to have some SUBSTANCE. Also, having drawings come to life isn't an original idea, and that often counts for something.
Author's Response:
i'll try to make more original things
though, its a serie about drawings dooing things....
thx for review
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I was surprised when I first clicked the link, I thought it would be something completely unrelated to religion, and more related to killing and violence. But it was a nice surprise! I'm Roman Catholic, and I liked seeing something related to Christianity here. Whether or not it is common, I don't know, but this was my first. The graphics were good, but not very detailed, you could see very easily the pivots you used for tweening. but Jesus was good, and he was deatiled, like the holes in the hands and feet. Other than that, the graphics were pretty straightforward. I liked the style though, although the Ten Commandments could have been presented in more creative way. The beating up of Jesus was an awesome addition. I was not expecting it, I thought it was just going to be the commandments and that was it. I loved the voices, loved them. They were perfectly suited to the characters. It was really good, I would just work on the graphics for next time.
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I used to review your colour works(Blue, Green and Red) a long time ago when I was under the alias sweetiepoi, you always left nice author comments. But then I saw any of your work, when I got the email about this one I was very excited and you didn't let me down. This is such an original idea, in my year and a half at newgrounds I've never seen an ASCII flash, it was beautiful and original, something that's hard to come by. The animation was nearly flawless, I can't remember a single point where I found a fault. I adored this, it's going on my favorite's list, where it should be. Keep up the originality and keep up your amazing animation because you are definitely one of the best animators I've seen on here.
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It was so cute, the way the characters were drawn, and the sounds were very cute too. The jokes were only smirk-worthy and not laugh-out-loud funny, but still the overall presentation of the pieces made it all worthwhile. It has a very good score and it's a very small file, which is a plus because it will loadfast on slower computers and doesn't take up all the space on newgrounds. I loved the incorporation of other characters into this flash, ;like Catwoman and Shrek. It was a very cute flash.
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"This is fast becoming my favorite series on NG"
I wasn't even around NG when these first came out, but I've seen some flashes from that era and you were ahead of your time. This flash starts off with a highly entertaining preloader, followed by an amazing quote. I loved the intro, I love now each of the characters are so different and how you managed to get into each of their heads. When I do short stories for English, the characters never differ as much as yours do. You really get into their heads. The graphics are amazing and there is a lot of detail that goes onto it. The script is flawless and flowing and amazing. I loved it. I loved Melvin, he was such a beautiful nerd 'I long for your virtual caress' has become my favorite quote. The script was seriously amazing. It was amazing, it's almost made for TV, it has the setting of a great TV show, it's amazing, it can go so many places. My overuse of the word amazing probably isn't doing anything for ya. I loved the priest, I loved Randy. I loved your facial expressions, your facial expressions are great. They work so wonderfully and they are so natural, it looks so natural. This flash truly kept me entertained throughout the whole thing, it wasn't one of those flashes that play in the background while I chat on MSN, this had my full attention and it was beautiful. It was hilarious and I loved it for than I love chocolate.
Author's Response:
You get 2 responses for being awesome!
Jason-
No no, awesome works just fine! This series has always been about the script and dialouge... if you don't believe me, just look at the crappy artwork in part 1! =P I am really glad that you enjoyed the diferences in the charecters as well. In one way or another, they're all me, so it's easy for me to pick what they're going to say or do. Does that indicate some level of internal conflict? Well, maybe. Thanks for such an amazing response. And I know your love for chocolate. It still edges out cartooning for me =P
Ed-
Style and depth develop as you grow into your writing-- this from one with two degrees in english. Through the fatigue and work I found my own writing style making growth spurts, changing dramatically and suddenly. most often painfully. I co-wrote the last few scenes with Dixinator while under going my master's thesis-- our shared sense of humor kept me sane through most of the work. And from it I tried to put my frustrations with technology, work, love, and of course, online gaming into Melvin. Similarly, Jason's finishing touches to the jokes, development and vision kept us working forward. We were unsure for the longest time, but we found our way to what we felt was the best story. We wanted to make this something ground breaking and fans like you truly let us know that. Thank you from the depths of my dark black soul.
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One of the bad things of having a successful series, is that you are always forced to make your new one better than your last. When I first saw this I was like WOAH TV SEX PALS, AWESOME. But then I watched it and I didn't find it any more than mediocre. It was funny at some parts, but your STD joke, wasn't funny and neither were a lot of places, it was almost like a highly anticipated speech, with pauses for laughter, but the crowd doesn't laugh. I also found a bunch of lazy animating, like the bricks. Your bricks was just a google image copied and pasted all over, and the animation of Billy's father turning his head made me gag. It did have it's beautiful bits, 'hey look here's the mother fucker that killed billy' was funny, The sex mobile was beautiful and the dead timmy sticker was nice too. Everything else was lovely and I really liked it, but I didn't feel it lived up to the expectations I set for it. It was funny at some bits but some bits weren't. Altogether it's neither a thumbs up nor a thumbs down, more in the middle.
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It's amazing, but what did I expect? You worked tremendously hard on this and it really did pay off. Bad luck that Newgrounds Sim and Nim's Winter Tale and to come out at the same time as these because this is amazing but it may be overshadowed. It really deserves to be the highest honours a flash can get because it is very good.
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"At first, I thought blam, but it's amazing"
When i first saw this flash I was sure it would be a blam, but then I saw the graphics and they are amazing. They are unlike anything I have ever seen, it looks almost like a painting, but then it moves and the animation is spectacular, the music perfects this masterpiece. It touched my heart and I thought it was beautiful and wonderfully creative. I hope you get an amazing grade for it.
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